Plop them onto a finished background and see what looks right. My vote is for officialversion1 (light lines on both hunter and foxes). I also really like officialversion3. Either way, I'd say keep lighter interior lines on the hunter for readability. His dark palette against the dark bg colours means that if the lines are black, much of the detail will be lost.
So THIS one was your film! I kept passing by your desk wondering whose film this was because the drawings on your desk board are beautiful! I hope you push through with this idea, its looking great! great style! I'm a fan! =)
Janine! Sorry for not answering this, I haven't been updating my blog for a while. thank you! (: